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 | | Subject: Bob/Bobby-stu(What not to do when making a character){MUST READ} Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:28 pm | |
| Here are some simple tips on what to do when making a character. Here's an example of a bad character: - Spoiler:
Name: Bob Stan
Gender:male
Age:17
Birthday:july 1,1998
Family:None known family members
Brief History:grew up on the streets. found camp everdeen by accident. now stay's by himself. wants to search for his family.
Personality:Bob is sad. He wishes to find out his family. He leaves camp every now and then to search for them. He loves training.
Apperance:Bob has black hair. Bob has blue eyes. Bob is caucasion skin. Bob is 5'11''
Powers:can teleport
Pets:dislikes animals
Weapons:sword
Talents:fighting, running
Fatal flaw: Sticks to himself.
Other:Nope.
This is a bad character, as it does meet the standers, but is not very detaled. Here's a better version of the same character. - Spoiler:
Name:Bob Stan
Gender:Male
Age:17
Birthday:July 1, 1994
Family:No none family.
Brief History:Bob grew up on the streets, alone after his mother and father abandond him. He grew up in a foster home, and eventually ran away because his foster family called him a freak. While on the run, Bob was captured by the P.A.M. At the time, Bob wasn't in full control of his powers so he was releaced. About a month later, he had heard about camp everdeen by one of the other escape-ee's. His goal from then on, was to learn how to use his powers and find his family.
Personality:Bob is a loner, and tends to stick to himself. He dosn't really enjoy talking to people all that much. He also really wants to find his family. Bob will often leave camp, in search of his family. When he is at camp, Bob is constantly. He does this in case the P.A.M. capture him again.
Apperance:Bob has shaggy jet black hair. It comes down to about his shoulders, and he likes it long. His eyes are a crystal blue color. They are the same color of the sky. Bob's skin is considerd to be caucasion, but his skin is very tan from living on the streets. He is also short for his age, at 5' 11''.
Powers:Bob has the ability to teleport.
Pets:Bob dosn't get along with animals.
Weapons:Bob has a sword that he keeps at his side at all times.
Talents:Bob is good at...
~Fighting
~Running.
Fatal flaw:Bob tends to stick to himself, which gives the P.A.M. an advantige over the rest of the mutants.
See the diffrence? The second is the sam as the first, but is much more detaled. It has the same exact information, but a lot more detaled. | |
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